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The most unforgettable day in my life

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This seems very rude to me. What is your opinion? Jul 09 2015 21: This story is about a time when I was in 9th grade. I was having a conversation with my friend on the topic of 'Computer Games'. We often used to talk about their genre, animation and configuration.

  • That event was a total bad luck for me, Comma splice;
  • I was really curious to know who the person was and why was he carrying woods with him so I quickly put on my muffler and followed him till the end of my house.

In the middle of our conversation, I took out a packet of sweetened betel nut and began to chew. It was really a bad habit of mine to chew that thing Better: Stop the sentence here with a full stop I always wanted to nip that habit in the bud, but I was addicted to it.

My unforgettable day

I didn't know that it would change my life in a matter of minutes. I was constantly talking while chewing it then when all of a sudden It it stuck in my throat, Comma splice. Stop the sentence here with a full stop It was choking and my friend was shouting something like 'What happened! I immediately went to my home and drank a glass of water to get it out of my throat. My throat was free now and I could breathe again.

However, there was still a feeling that It's it was still in my throat. I was so much terrified by the event that I couldn't sleep though out one word the night. That event was a total bad luck for me, Comma splice.

Stop the sentence here with a full stop subsequently I was ill for a period of three months. But, I thanked God and made a promise to myself that i I would never eat that injurious thing again in my life. It is a very good story for an intermediate learner.

The vocabulary is very good and idiomatic. However, the sentence structure needs a bit of work. Be careful of the comma splice.

  • I was having a conversation with my friend on the topic of 'Computer Games';
  • In the middle of our conversation, I took out a packet of sweetened betel nut and began to chew;
  • First time I posted this Essay one week earlier,but no body replied to it.

Practice using transitional words which introduce subordinate clauses. I would give an 8 or 9 of 10 to a student at an intermediate level. Frankly speaking, It was really disappointing.

  • The moment I saw that thing, I forgot my tiredness and sleep and shook with terror;
  • However, the sentence structure needs a bit of work;
  • But, again what I got was only desperation;
  • It was the most frightening experience I ever had.

First time I posted this Essay one week earlier,but no body replied to it. Then ,I finally managed to re-post it yesterday while presuming that I would get a satisfying reply. But, again what I got was only desperation.

Unforgettable Day of my Life

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